I forgot this one
in any garth blog you can find 20+ mistakes, no matter how short or long it is. call it nitpicking all you want, this is just pathetic. don't know how ek promotes it, oh yeah probably because he lied about having a journalism degree too.
My opening night buzz was killed when the Rangers handed the Sabres a 6-3 loss in front of 16,890 inside HSBC Arena on Saturday night.
first mistake, attendance is wrong.
Marty Biron quickly lifted my mood when I happened up to his locker stall after the game.
anyone know how to "happen up to a locker stall"?
Because he’s in the visitor’s room now, time is off the essence after games.
visitors
Now, it’s a fast-paced convo, all the while, Marty is stuffing his gear in his bag and packing away his helmet.
improper usage of commas and/or random usage of all the while
. We talk hockey, then the conversation goes to other places, Marty has four kids and has a life outside of hockey.
This isn't a sentence..
..unlike last season when Marty left for The Island, and his pregnant wife and three children stayed behind in Clarence.
yeah, the island isn't capitalized..
Marty and I exchanged Hellos
.......seriously?
Roy Halladay’s now legendary no-hitter that he had twirled last week.
not sure i've ever seen a pitcher twirling, but whatever
Biron loves all sports, however, he has a serious jones for his Phillies. I’m guilty of chirping Marty after the Yankees beat the Phillies in the 2009 World Series.
not exactly grammatically incorrect, just horribly written.
Lets just wait
missed apostrophe
“The Playoffs have been great!
no end quote
“I’ve never met him. He wasn’t there when I was there. I’ve met Chase (Utley), (Ryan) Howard, (Shane) Victorino and those guys when I was there”.
period goes before end quote, not after..
According to the veteran net minder,
hyphenation b/t net and minder..
nothing can compare to the overall experience of watching a Phillies game live I and in person.
I?!?!!? what about i. that doesn't fit.
“That ballpark in Philly is such a great ballpark. Its great to watch a game and its great to be there. The one year, when they played Tampa in the world series, the one game was scheduled to start at 8.… it didn’t start til 10:30. We (the Flyers) moved our game to the afternoon and then we walked over to the ballpark at 7 o’clock cuz we thought the game was starting at 8. So, we just hung out there. It was such a great place to be, to be with all of the fans. It was great to be there”.
again, period before quote..
Marty read me Friday blog and quizzed me about the Roger waters concert inside HSBC Arena on Friday night.
lets see. "marty read me friday blog" and failure to capitalize Waters..
...bunch of the guys went",he asked.
Again, wrong.......
“It was alright, lots of old farts liking me rocking out, trying to recapture our youth. you still have your youth, so its not for you”, I quipped. ‘Nothing you’d be interested in, right I asked.
..and again..
“There are a bunch of Pink Floyd songs that I would like to hear him play live in concrert”, he answered
..and again..also, don't forget the missed period after answered
“Like “Comfortably Numb?“, I asked.
well, good try i guess.
“Yeah”.
this is getting pathetic..
I added, ‘maybe a Yankees/Phillies World Series game is in your near future plans?”
and the beat goes on....
Like yours truly, drury is a died in the wool Yankees fanatic.
capitalize drury, apostrophe missing, ANDDDDDDDDDd it's dyed in the wool, hyphenated too.
- ScalrBuzz
This kid found EVERY mistake from a Garth blog
http://www.hockeybuzz.com...p?thread_id=68849&page=57